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From: Melanie Corfield
Sent: 08/08/2014 09:
To: Belinda Crowe {_ rst Administrative
Gre =Reci }; matthew fielden
Subject:
Attachments: Blank 10.docx MC.docx
Belinda
Agree with previous comments — lands the points effectively. A few tracked changes from me in attached...
of ‘minor’ but important ones included:
- Inthe section on evidence and analysis I’ve tweaked the words re “largely speculative” - can we say instead “it
lacks examples or statistics to substantiate speculative conclusions it does draw”. This gives us a useful point of
reference if report reaches public domain
- Refer to applicants not subpostmasters in penultimate para
Mel
From: Belinda Crowe
Sent: 08 August 2014 05:50
To: Andrew Parsons; Angela Van-Den-Bogerd; matthew fielden; Jonathan Swil
Corfield; Rodric Williams
Cc: Belinda Crowe
Subject: Response to Second Sight Part 2
...a couple
Melanie
All,with apologies for the very scrappy appearance of the attached but I would welcome urgent views on
this,with many thanks to Andy and Matthew.
Tam looking at a potential annex now, and how much detail to put in it.
Please feel free to either comment or track and also make any suggestions for improved wording as anything
else.
Copying Rod as he may want to have an opportunity to comment and I know is checking some emails.
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