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From: Callard Richard (ShEx)[/O=BIS PRODUCTION/OU=EXCHANGE ADMINISTRATIVE GROUP
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Sent: Fri 12/12/2014 3:33:30 PM (UTC)
To: Patrick Bourke!
Ce: Belinda Crowe}.
Subject: RE: DRAFT Q&A
Patrick - I think this is a really excellent first draft. I think the tone is right and there is a good balance of detail vs
clarity/"punchiness".
Some of the answers are a bit long or might need a bit of reordering to get the main thrust of the response in the first or
second line but overall I am very happy with these. Please continue in this vein, I look forward to the remaining
questions.
Just from the point of view of version control, shall I wait for the rest of the answers to be populated before I start
tweaking. When might I get the next draft. Realistically I will get to it on Sunday not Saturday if that's any help (or not, I
appreciate no one likes to work the weekend, least of all me!).
R
P.s. My main man Peter is leaving, and he was great at lines. Do you want a job @
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From: Patrick Bourke
Sent: 12/12/2014 15:23
To: Callard Richard (ShEx’
Cc: Belinda Crowe
Subject: DRAFT Q&A
Dear Richard
We spoke, albeit with difficulty.
As promised, here is a DRAFT of where we are up to on the Q&A you requested for JS.
I must stress that this is a draft and that we are still working on it. However, if you have the time to take a look and
provide any comments, that would obviously be much appreciated.
Kind regards
Patrick
Patrick Bourke
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